Talk:Adele One Night Only/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Pseud 14 (talk · contribs) 14:30, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

Good Article review progress box Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Grabbing this one as I may have some familiarity with concerts or television special. Plus, I thoroughly enjoyed watching this when it aired. I will review in the next couple days. My second dabble within the GAN review space (so apologies if it will be a bit slow). Pseud 14 (talk) 14:30, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• previously-unheard songs -- perhaps unreleased songs?
• as well as previously released material -- as well as material from her previous albums or maybe tracks/singles from her previous albums, just so "released" isn't repeated

Background

• which featured her performing for a crowd -- maybe an audience is much better

Synopsis

• Maybe mention the actual filming location in Winfery's home in Montecito in the beginning and just give the second para lead a little tweak
• beeped using a three-second delay -- maybe censored using a three-second delay. Could benefit linking to broadcast delay as well

Reception

• the special had 9.92 million primetime viewers -- could use either drew or attracted
• primetime could be omitted as well, as this is assumed to be the live audience ratings as it aired, so viewers will suffice.
• Assuming this is the journalist Lorraine Ali. It could benefit linking.
• but he was positive about the proposal - could use the correct pronoun (she) if this is meant to refer to Lorraine.

Set list

• OK

Broadcast

• Add full name Reference(s) to the abbreviation

Awards and nomination

• I would use Ref(s) and Reference(s) in the table so it is both consistent.

References

Since source names have been mostly linked, so as a matter of consistency:

• Link Deadline to Deadline Hollywood
• Ref 17 missing source name
• Ref 29 pipe CBS Sacramento to KOVR
• Ref 55 link to ABS-CBNnews.com

Copyvio score 25.4% acceptable and seems ok as it is use of quote.

Media

File:Adele - One Night Only.jpeg with appropriate FUR for non-free image - OK

Final comments and verdict

• @MaranoFan: I have finished my review and have put this on hold until after comments are addressed; great job on a very high quality work! Pseud 14 (talk) 16:12, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

• Thank you very much for taking up this review, Pseud 14! I have actioned all of your comments and addressed them, along with some copyediting. Let me know if the revisions are satisfactory. Hope everything is well!--NØ 16:26, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

• Looks good. Passing. Pseud 14 (talk) 17:36, 7 June 2023 (UTC)

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