Talk:2019 World Open (snooker)/GA1

Latest comment: 4 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 13:17, 16 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

Will review this article. MWright96 (talk) 13:17, 16 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

Thanks for taking a look at this one, MWright96. It's not the longest in my arsenal, so let me know what needs a fix. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 13:54, 16 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

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Prize fund

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  • The second and third sentences are not backed up by the World Snooker source and require another reference
added Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 10:13, 17 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

Tournament format

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  • "This was the 37th World Open tournament," - The Snooker Scene reference attaced to this does not mention it wasthe 37th ediiton of the tournament. This will require a reference that explcitly states this.
  • "The defending champion, Mark Williams, declined to appear at the tournament." - Where there any reasons stated for Williams' absence?
  • The Guardian source does not mention Robertson was given a map to the qualifiers for the Northern Ireland Open. Please rectify this.

Early rounds (round one—quarter-finals)

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  • "Binghams' century break in frame six was the 300th of his career." - this sentence is unsupported by the snooker.org source and will need another reference to verify it
    • Removed - it's not true, it happened in the international championship - good shout.
  • Also it should be "Bingham's" and not "Binghams'"
  • "led 2–1 before breaks of 100, 55 and 62 from Gilbert in the next three frames." - I feel there is an word that is missing from this sentence
  • "Un-Nooh won the next three frames with breaks of 77, 66 and 96 in just 37 minutes to reach the semi-finals." - The Sporting Life and World Snooker refs do not state that Un-Nooh won the final three frames in 37 minutes
  • "Had he won the event, he was the last remaining player who could qualify for the Champion of Champions event ahead of Jimmy White." - this is not supported by the sportinglife reference. Please find a source that explicitly states this
  • "The fourth and final semi-finalist was Kyren Wilson. Wilson, a two-time ranking event winner" - Try not to have the last word of a sentence start the next one like this

Later rounds (semi-final—final)

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Main draw

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Main stage centuries

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  • World Snooker state there were 64 century breaks and not 62. Please correct this in the prose and by adding in the bullet points the missing centuries.
fixed Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 17:37, 18 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

Qualifying stage centuries

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  • World Snooker has 32 century breaks in the qualifying stages rather than the 34 stated in the article. Please find another source to back up this claim or remove the two centuries that are affected if they cannot be verified

References

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Overall there are some issues concerning the grammar to the prose and to the verifiability of some of the content which does not have a reliable source attaced to it. Since many of these are likely to be quick fixes, I will put the review on hold until all of the fixes have been addressed accordingly. MWright96 (talk) 15:33, 16 December 2019 (UTC)Reply

Thank you for your review, MWright96 - sorry it took so long to finish my end - I think I've got it all now. Best Wishes, Lee Vilenski (talkcontribs) 18:32, 21 December 2019 (UTC)Reply
@Lee Vilenski: Am now promoting to GA class. Note I have made some changes to the article. MWright96 (talk) 06:22, 23 December 2019 (UTC)Reply