Talk:2010 Irwin Tools Night Race
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Good888 in topic GA Review
 | 2010 Irwin Tools Night Race has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: January 17, 2014. (Reviewed version). |
 | A fact from 2010 Irwin Tools Night Race appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 4 September 2010 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 11:36, 17 January 2015 (UTC)
Might as well review another NASCAR article. good888 (talk) 11:36, 17 January 2015 (UTC)
Lead section
- "Chevrolet maintained its lead in the Manufacturers' Championship, twenty-seven ahead of Toyota and sixty-three ahead of Ford, with twelve races remaining in the season." I will add how many they were ahead of Dodge too.
Report
- "Denny Hamlin was third in the Drivers' Championship with 3,047 points in a Chevrolet" Not too sure we need to know he was in a Chevrolet. I suggest removing that.
- "Six drivers did not qualify because one team withdrew from qualifying." Which team?
- "The race was preempted in Southeast Michigan due to that year's Woodward Dream Cruise, broadcast on Scripps-owned WXYZ-TV in Southfield, Michigan." Scripps Media is a red link. Did you mean Scripps Networks Interactive?
- Who are Ruth Graham and Delwyn Thorton?
- "After twenty-nine laps, Robby Gordon and Michael McDowell had driven to the garage." Reason why?
- "On lap 65, Kasey Kahne received drive-through penalty after driving too fast on pit lane." A drive-through penalty you mean.
- "Also during the accident, Tony Raines collided in the back of Stewart's race car." I would remove the word also from this sentence.
- "On lap 192, Scott Speed had a tire to deflate, prompting the fourth caution." Rewrite to: "On lap 192, one of Scott Speed's tires deflated, prompting the fourth caution"
- "On lap 371, Sam Hornish, Jr. drove toward pit lane." Not too sure if this is notable enough. I would remove this.
- "Kyle Busch won the race, leading a race high of 282 laps." I would change this a bit. I suggest noting that he made history.
Results
- I think you were trying to link Gunselman Motorsports in the qualifying sub-section?
- Yes, I always miss one...
I will promote once the issues above are addressed. good888 (talk) 11:36, 17 January 2015 (UTC)
Done with all, thanks again for your reviews. --Bentvfan54321 (talk) 14:00, 17 January 2015 (UTC)
