Talk:2004 Les Saintes earthquake

Latest comment: 1 year ago by LunaEatsTuna in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:27, 19 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Add a short description and then WP:ALT text to both images.
  • "a moment magnitude of 6.3 and a maximum" → "a moment magnitude of 6.3 and maximum"
  • "runup" should be written as "run-up".
  • "northern and southern boundary" → "northern and southern boundaries"
  • "a school, a church, and to some homes" → "a school, a church, and some homes"
  • Add a comma after "mid-February".
  • "again full again" - reword
  • "Guadelouple" - typo?
  • Archive sources (you can use this).
  • Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 20:09, 21 July 2021 (UTC)Reply


GA Review

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Reviewer: LunaEatsTuna (talk · contribs) 16:00, 5 January 2023 (UTC)Reply

Copyvio

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Earwig says good to go. No concerns from me after reading the sources either.

Files

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File:USGS Shakemap – 2004 Les Saintes earthquake.jpg: good, relevant, valid public domain rationale.

Prose

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  • "the eastern boundary is that of the Lesser Antilles subduction zone" – first mention in the body, wikilink Lesser Antilles subduction zone
  • "A maximum intensity of VIII (Heavily damaging)" – maybe reiterate that this was recorded via the European macroseismic scale?
  • "and a college were red-tagged" – red-tagged?
  • "that occurred about 7 km (4.3 mi) to the northwest of the" – "to the" is unnecessary.
  • "and wall and roof damage (including at some locations that were damaged during the mainshock)." – this is personal taste but I find it visually unappealing when a sentence ends with parentheses like this; there are two punctuation marks plus the citation. Suggest "and wall and roof damage—including at some locations that were damaged during the mainshock."
  • "scientists were on scene within several days to investigate." – reads a bit like an upbeat news article; maybe "scientists were on scene several days later to investigate."?
  • There are a few instances of "sea dropped" – should "sea" be "sea level" here?
  • Add WP:ALT text to the image.
  • Recommend adding Template:Use mdy dates and Template:Use X English under the short description.

See also

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  • I do not think Overseas France is necessary; wikilinking overseas department in the lead should be enough.

Refs

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  • Refs 3 and 7 look to be dead links.

Spot check on refs 5 and 8 show no concerns—they both support their cited content. I have access to ref 5 via the Wikipedia Library.

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Good.

Other

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Navs and cats all good.

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