Talk:1983 World Championships in Athletics – Women's marathon/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 19:39, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
Taking this review. MWright96 (talk) 19:39, 6 July 2020 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead
edit- Think it would help to add the country Kaneko and May represented for consistency in the lead
Background
edit- "though there was significant opposition" - from whom?
- "announced that it would be added to the program" - should the word in bold be programme instead?
- "Press in the United States rated Julie Brown" - How about amending the text in bold to The American press?
- "Amby Burfoot said that despite the fact Waitz had beaten Brown in their previous meetings" - how many previous meetings?
- Wikilink Amby Burfoot
Summary
edit- Ireland should be wikilinked to the Republic of Ireland article, not to the article discussing the whole Island of Ireland
- "Two miles later," - what about changing his text to say Two miles (3.2 km) for consistency?
- "as there weren't men" - were not; no contractions please per MOS:CONTRACTION
References
edit- Wikilink Amby Burfoot in Reference 7 and The Hartford Courant
- Wikilink The Boston Globe in Reference 8
- Wikilink Kenny Moore in Reference 9
Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 06:53, 7 July 2020 (UTC)