Draft talk:Ivan Ssewankambo

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Gavin Ngabonziza in topic REVIEW, EDIT, AND PROVE PAGE

REVIEW, EDIT, AND PROVE PAGE edit

Hi everyone, I find it a little unusual that many people doing nice things especially where I come from go unrecognized. I therefore drafted this page on the basis of sharing with the world what people are doing. Ivan Sewankambo is the engineer behind the refurbishment of a WWII memorial stadium in Uganda. I pieced together publicly available information and came up with this page to share with everyone else. I believe anyone anywhere doing any good to a magnitude this man should have a place on this amazing platform. @Tenryuu @Hoary @Gronk Oz @Help @Help Editor Wiki @Teahouse Gavin Ngabonziza (talk) 13:31, 10 March 2024 (UTC)Reply

@Gavin Ngabonziza: I am glad to read that you wrote this article based on what sources said. You need to reference them explicitly in the article. At the moment, it does not refer to any sources at all. That would be a good next step in building the article.--Gronk Oz (talk) 14:36, 10 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
You mean like quoting the actual information or reported speech kind of edit? Gavin Ngabonziza (talk) 14:39, 10 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
@Gavin Ngabonziza: I'm not an AfC reviewer, but this draft should be restructured as it reads a lot like a resumé or CV. There also shouldn't be external links in the body. Please read WP:EASYREFBEGIN to learn how to add citations. —Tenryuu 🐲 ( 💬 • 📝 ) 14:44, 10 March 2024 (UTC)Reply
I just edited out the links. For the résumé like tone, it's because I didn't want to sound conflicted. I was editing a biography once and it sounded like I knew the person. Gavin Ngabonziza (talk) 14:48, 10 March 2024 (UTC)Reply