Draft talk:Felix Albrecht Harta (2)

Suggested improvements

To bring this more in line with the Manual of Style, please make the following changes:

• Section headings should be in Sentence case, not Initial Caps.
• Remove all inline external links from body text; convert to citations where relevant.
• Lists, such as those in the 'Awards' and 'Selected Museums Where Works Reside' sections should be bulleted.
• Lists of awards, works, etc. should usually also be in chronological order, running from oldest to newest.
• Remove the bold + italic formatting from the quotes in sections 'Inter-war Period (1918-1938)' and 'Return to Salzburg and Later Life (1950-1967)', and use the {{blockquote}} template instead.
• Consider adding an infobox, specifically {{Infobox artist}}.

HTH, -- DoubleGrazing (talk) 17:18, 26 May 2024 (UTC)