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Comment: Still needs the references and section headers fixing. Zippybonzo | Talk (he|him) 06:39, 24 May 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: A lot of promotional content has been removed, but since every single sentence that remains is also promotional and has not been revised, the draft is still written in an unacceptable tone.Instead of fixing the ref dump as explained by Theroadislong, sources have been added as external links in the article. Please remove all such links, and add proper references. bonadea contributions talk 21:41, 19 May 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: See WP:REFB for help with formatting sources, it is helpful to reviewers if the references are placed directly after the content that they support. The draft will need a complete re-write in neutral encyclopaedic tone. Theroadislong (talk) 08:45, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
- Comment: Potentially passes WP:NPOLITICIAN but is not written in a neutral point of view. It is written like a fan page not an encyclopaedic article. Dan arndt (talk) 03:46, 18 May 2023 (UTC)
Abdul Gani Naseem was a influential figure in the political landscape of Jammu and Kashmir (state), India. Born in 1948, in the village of Falchal in Kashmir.
Abdul Gani Naseem entered the realm of politics as he joined the Jammu & Kashmir National Conference(JKNC), a political party in Jammu and Kashmir, and contested the 1996 Jammu and Kashmir Legislative Assembly election from the Khan Sahib Assembly constituency in 1996. Despite the risks posed by militant organizations during the height of the Insurgency in Jammu and Kashmir [1], Abdul Gani Naseem emerged victorious, becoming a Member of the Legislative Assembly (MLA)[2]
Abdul Gani Naseem's political journey also included short affiliations with other parties like the Indian National Congress[3] and the People's Democratic Party (PDP)[4]. However, he left these parties due to perceived lack of focus on the issues affecting the common people. In addition to his political journey, Abdul Gani Naseem was a writer and author of 12 books in Urdu and 3 of them were published in a District Literature Function[5] .
Tragically, Abdul Gani Naseem contracted COVID-19 in September 2020[6]. Despite receiving medical attention, his condition deteriorated, and he passed away on October 3, 2020. His untimely demise left a deep void in the hearts of the people who knew him[7]. Abdul Gani Naseem's journey as an educator, dedicated political leader, and advocate for the rights of the marginalized continues to inspire many.[8]
CONCLUSION: edit
A teacher, influential political leader, and as a writer, Naseem's journey has left an indelible mark on the lives of countless individuals in Jammu and Kashmir. [9]
On October 3, 2020, Abdul Gani Naseem's life was tragically cut short by COVID-19, leaving a void in the hearts of those who knew him and a profound loss for Jammu and Kashmir. [10]
BIRTH: edit
Abdul Gani Naseem was born in 1948, in the village of Falchal, located in the Budgam district of Jammu and Kashmir, India.
POLITICAL JOURNEY: edit
Abdul Gani Naseem had a very influential political career that spanned multiple parties and elections in Jammu and Kashmir. After joining the Jammu & Kashmir National Conference (JKNC), Naseem became the candidate for the Khansahab Constituency in District Budgam of Kashmir.[11]
In 1996, despite the high level of militancy in Kashmir, Abdul Gani Naseem contested the Assembly Elections and emerged victorious, securing a seat as a Member of the Jammu and Kashmir Legislative Assembly (MLA).[12]
However, in the subsequent Assembly Elections of Jammu and Kashmir in 2002, Abdul Gani Naseem faced defeat and encountered internal conflicts within the National Conference Party, he decided to resign from the party, citing issues of nepotism and favoritism as the primary reasons for his departure.[13]
Following his resignation, he later joined the Indian National Congress but eventually left the party due to what he perceived as a lack of genuine commitment to the development of the common people in Jammu and Kashmir.[14]
After a break from active politics, Abdul Gani Naseem returned to the political arena upon a request from the Jammu and Kashmir Peoples Democratic Party(PDP) of Jammu and Kashmir[15]. Despite not seeking any portfolios, he emphasized his unwavering commitment to assisting the poor and the needy, aligning himself with the party's mission. [16]
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- ^ "Jammu & Kashmir Assembly Election Results in 1996". www.elections.in. ELECTIONS.IN. Retrieved 15 Aug 2021.
- ^ ET REPORT. "Not sure about pre-poll alliance: Soz, Abdul Gani Naseem, and others - Early Times Newspaper Jammu Kashmir". www.earlytimes.in. Early Times. Retrieved 1 Dec 2014.
- ^ Kashmir Pen (3 August 2020). "Will mark August 5 as black day with protests: PDP Leaders, Abdul Gani Naseem and others- KashmirPEN". KASHMIR PEN. Retrieved 3 Aug 2020.
- ^ KL News Network (3 October 2020). "Covid-19 Kills Another Former Lawmaker, Abdul Gani Naseem". Kashmir Life. Kashmir Life. Retrieved 3 Oct 2020.
- ^ Netwok, Images News. "Four poetic collections released at Mehfil-e-Mushaira function in Budgam, Including 3 Books Authored By Abdul Gani Naseem". Kashmir Images Newspaper. The Kashmir Images. Retrieved 26 Apr 2018.
- ^ "PDP delegation visits late Abdul Gani Naseem's residence". Jammu & Kashmir Peoples Democratic Party. JK PDP. 4 October 2020. Retrieved 4 Oct 2020.
- ^ KNS (3 October 2020). "NC, PDP, Hakeem condole Abdul Gani Naseem's demise". Greater Kashmir. Greater Kashmir. Retrieved 4 Oct 2020.
- ^ Naseer Ganai. "Srinagar's dreaded interrogation centres get makeover". India Today. India Today. Retrieved 20 Feb 2012.
- ^ "Newspaper offices searched, NC MLA Abdul Gani Naseem paraded - Main News". m.tribuneindia.com. The Tribune. Retrieved 22 June 2002.
- ^ Indepth, Kashmir (23 January 2019). "AG Naseem joins PDP". Kashmir Indepth. KINS COMMUNICATIONS. Retrieved 23 Jan 2019.
- ^ Today, The Kashmir (4 October 2020). "Dr. Farooq, Omar Abdullah condole demise of Dr. Nazir Ahmed Wani, Abdul Gani Naseem » Kashmir.Today". Kashmir.Today. Kashmir Today. Retrieved 4 Oct 2020.
- ^ KNS (2020). "Congress Condoles The Demise Of Abdul Gani Naseem". www.knskashmir.com. KNS KASHMIR. Retrieved 4 Oct 2020.
- ^ "🗳️ Ab. Gani Naseem winner in Khansahib, Jammu and Kashmir Assembly Elections 1996: LIVE Results & Latest News: Election Dates, Polling Schedule, Election Results & Live Election Updates". LatestLY. LATESTLY.
- ^ "IndiaVotes AC: Khansahib 2002". IndiaVotes. INDIA VOTES.
- ^ "JK ASSEMBLY ELECTIONS : Khansahib 1996". IndiaVotes. INDIA VOTES.
- ^ Monitor News Bureau (24 January 2019). "Congress Leader Abdul Gani Naseem joins PDP". The Kashmir Monitor. The Kashmir Monitor.
- ^ INDERJIT BADHWAR. "Violence-ridden Kashmir begins to heal as people participate in assembly elections". India Today. INDIA TODAY.