Wikipedia talk:Featured article review/Assassination of Robert F. Kennedy/archive1

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FAC Nominator User:Fritzpoll

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1. Fritzpoll 14.6%
2. Kavyansh.Singh 10.2% (first edit 2021-12-23 13:07)
3. XXzoonamiXX 5.4%

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1. Fritzpoll · 258 (32.2%)
2. Compson1 · 139 (17.4%)
3. 64.236.240.190 · 89 (11.1%)

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• "In November 2006, the BBC's Newsnight program presented research by filmmaker Shane O'Sullivan alleging that several Central Intelligence Agency (CIA) officers were present on the night of the assassination." - checks out
• "Kennedy's wife Ethel was three months pregnant; she stood outside the scene" - not finding where the source says Ethel was pregnant, could you provide a page number for this? (I may have missed it in the 27 page document)
  • It should be somewhere in those 27 pages, but I added another source (from The Gurdian), so that works, I think. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 13:39, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
• "Gavin Newsom, the governor of California, denied the parole in January 2022, asserting in an opinion piece for Los Angeles Times that "Sirhan has not developed the accountability and insight required to support his safe release into the community."" - checks out
• " Judge Beverly Reid O'Connell denied the petition in 2015." - checks out
• "Since his conviction, Sirhan has been denied parole 16 times." - checks out, but needs an "as of" date
  • Done (As of 2022). – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 13:39, 5 May 2022 (UTC)
• Block quote in legacy checks out
• "The following week, NBC devoted 55 hours to the shooting and aftermath, ABC 43 hours, and CBS 42 hours, with all three networks preempting their regular coverage and advertisements to cover the story" - source says they only pre-empted the regular coverage and advertisements at first, while the phrasing here could be read as to suggest that they did so most of the time.
  • Added "initially" there. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 13:39, 5 May 2022 (UTC)

Stopping here for now, have not looked at any print sources. Hog Farm _Talk 04:12, 5 May 2022 (UTC)

Pinging Hog Farm – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 08:43, 12 May 2022 (UTC)

I'm taking a general wikibreak for the next few days and I won't be able to any heavy source-text digging here. Hog Farm _Talk 13:20, 12 May 2022 (UTC)