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Nezamozhnik was one of eight Fidonisy-class destroyers (pictured) built for the Imperial Russian Navy during World War I. Originally named Zante, the ship was left unfinished during the Russian Revolution in 1917 and later captured by Ukrainian and White forces. She sank during a storm in 1920, but was refloated by the Soviets following their victory in the Russian Civil War, and completed in 1923. Refitted twice during the interwar period, the destroyer served in the Black Sea during World War II, helping to evacuate Odessa, supply besieged Soviet forces in Sevastopol, and support several amphibious operations during the Kerch–Feodosia Offensive and the Battle of the Caucasus. The ship saw no combat after three destroyers were sunk by German aircraft in a single action in October 1943. She received the Order of the Red Banner for her actions during the war. Nezamozhnik was converted into a target ship at the end of the 1940s and sunk during the early 1950s. (Full article...)

Just a suggested blurb ... thoughts and edits are welcome. - Dank (push to talk) 01:59, 23 November 2019 (UTC)Reply

Maybe a comma after 1920?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 04:00, 24 November 2019 (UTC)Reply
Sure, done. - Dank (push to talk) 04:08, 24 November 2019 (UTC)Reply