Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates/Blakeney Point/archive1

Addressed comments from TBrandley

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  • The image in description should be moved to the right side, perhaps further below, as per MOS:IMAGELOCATION
  • Per MOS:NUM, when doing conversions, please use standard abbreviations: for example, miles -> mi, kilometers squared -> km2, and pounds -> lb
  • I don't think "popular" should be there, as it isn't neutral, perhaps replace or remove per WP:NPOV, in recreation
  • Same goes for "one of the most important sites"
  • I've tweaked this to make it clear that this is an official designation, rather than a random opinion, also added ref to JNCC to confirm designation
  • Any external links?
  • Why do some news sources (like The Guardian) have location parameters, but some don't (like BBC Norfolk). Be consistent.
  • "British Broadcasting Company" isn't that, it is the "British Broadcasting Corporation"
  • Any external links section?
  • Categories should be sorted in alphabetical order

TBrandley 01:53, 18 October 2012 (UTC)Reply