Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/WWE SmackDown! vs. RAW 2006

WWE SmackDown! vs. RAW 2006 edit

I (as well as Jtalledo) have been working on this article for a while and I like the way the article's starting to look. I'd hopefully like to get this article to GA status in due time.

I was wondering what should I do to improve the article? I'd also like some help with the lead section, which I feel is a bit weak. Thanks in advance. --Oakster ^(Talk) 14:09, 31 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Perhaps you could expand the lead paragraph to indicate what makes this game different from the many other WWE titles out there - in particular, the GM mode. Reaction could have some more expansion, a cite for the negative criticism. Other than that, I don't see why you shouldn't apply for GA. Good work. --SevereTireDamage 21:16, 3 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've given a shot at improving the lead section now. I'll have a look at some more reviews to give some more meat to the reaction section before nominating the article. Thanks for the advice. --Oakster ^(Talk) 15:18, 6 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Before I nominate the article for GA, I have another query. I'm a little unsure over the amount of lists at the end of the article. Would it be a good idea if I remove the "In-ring arena" section, which I think is the least notable of the three, or not? --Oakster ^(Talk) 16:18, 7 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I don't think its necessary to remove it, it does place more temporal context to the game's release and development. However, I would convert the Weekly Shows and Backstage areas into a single paragraph of prose. --SevereTireDamage 20:18, 7 August 2006 (UTC)[reply]