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Universe of Kingdom Hearts

I just started trying to improve this article and would like a little advice since I haven't really edited an article like this before. This is currently at B-Class and I would like to get it up to GA in order to added it into a Kingdom Hearts Featured Topic that will hopefully pass nomination in the near future. Any suggestions would be appreciated. Thank you. (Guyinblack25 06:31, 19 July 2007 (UTC))

These kind of articles are difficult because there are no good precedents. You could say that World of Final Fantasy VIII is one (which is GA), but that's for a singular game. You'll need to decrease the size of the images (maybe 400x400?), and there will need to be a reception section. Fill the reception section with what some reviewers had to say - were the worlds childish, or well-designed, etc. - this is hard, but possible. I also suggest to make things less confusing... elaborate on everything. --Teggles 10:19, 21 July 2007 (UTC)

Thanks for the ideas. I'll see what I can apply from the FF world articles to this one, and try reducing the image sizes in the article. Regarding, a "Reception" section, we had a hard time finding suitable content to justify a section in the Kingdom Hearts (series) article. I'm afraid we may encounter the same problem with this article. The most I've found is only 2-3 reviews that each only briefly commented on the worlds and none of the specific worlds. In the series article we solved this by mentioning any reception info in the intro paragraphs. Any thoughts on how to tackle this? (Guyinblack25 ^talk 15:09, 24 July 2007 (UTC))