Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Uncharted: Drake's Fortune

Uncharted: Drake's Fortune edit

I would be interested in fellow editors' opinions on this article, as I believe it has reached a stage of stability, with enough references, plot and development information, and whether it would be suitable to go forward as a Featured Article candidate. SynergyBlades (talk) 02:05, 10 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I haven't given it a full overview, but I'll comment on what I have so far. I've got some issues w/ the third paragraph in the Gameplay section; it would be more helpful to eliminate the specific incident refs and go for a more general description of vehicle combat. There is also some issue w/ VG and other franchise titles not being italicized; I've corrected some of them, but that again was just a primary going around. --Hydrokinetics12 (talk) 05:06, 21 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I did a quick sweep of the article too. The things that stood out to me are the length of the lead (I would expand it to 3 paragraphs) and the plot section (I would trim it down to 4-5 paragraphs). The paragraph structure also seems unbalanced. Some are short (1-2 sentences) and others are much larger. I would try to balance things some, For example, the sequel and film section could be combined into a single section titled "Sequel and adaptions", "Legacy", or something to that effect.

I remember reading some magazines with some features on it, I'll see if I can find them and expand the development section some. (Guyinblack25 ^talk 17:50, 22 October 2008 (UTC))[reply]