Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Tikal the Echidna

Tikal the Echidna edit

This article sticks to the subject, has enough information, references, notes, and externals links, and has enough pictures. It is stable right now, as well. So is it ready to become a good article, an example article, or a featured article? --71.104.182.53 05:29, 14 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

This person has asked me to place this peer review here, since anonymous users can't create the "articles" needed to do this. -- RattleMan 06:23, 14 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

The "storyline" section is totally disjointed and has no context. Rather than blindly retelling her story, state what her role in the game is. Use phrases like "Thousands of years prior to the events of Sonic Adventure".
Abilities: Again, put it into context. Which abilities are part of the plot and which are part of gameplay?
Your references are mostly fansites, and as such aren't exactly the most reliable sources to use.
Here's a good essay on how to improve your article. Nifboy 06:34, 16 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, I'll try to fix it up. --71.105.3.211 20:57, 16 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Are there any other advice? --71.105.3.211 21:36, 16 April 2006 (UTC)[reply]