Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Pokémon Diamond and Pearl

Pokémon Diamond and Pearl edit

The games have been released, and I'm trying to get the article into an acceptable standard (A-class or FA-class). I'd like to know possible improvements including the use of citations, etc. - Sotomura (Tetsuya-san) (yell : see) 12:36, 26 April 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I don't see a development section. The lead tells us twice that the game takes place in Sinnoh. The "Pokemon" section needs a better title. The reader should have a reasonable expectation of what the section will be about from reading the title. That section also needs references. This sentence is unclear: "The mascots of Pokémon Diamond and Pearl are Dialga and Palkia, like Groudon and Kyogre or Ho-Oh and Lugia before them." "As their names suggest, Dialga represents Diamond, and Palkia represents Pearl." - how do their names suggest that? Pagra shtak 18:15, 5 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

While I work on the other problems, the lack of material I can find for "Development" seems to be an issue. - Sotomura (Tetsuya-san) (yell : see) 10:32, 8 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

The articles listed here and here should give you a good start. Pagra shtak 00:32, 9 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]