Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Personal computer game

Personal computer game edit

This page is currently rated as being B-class, and of mid-importance. The problems I see with the page are largely associated with the writing style, fluency, and depth of information provided - so I'd like to request specific pointers on how the quality of this article could be raised, at the very least, to GA-class. RandyWang (^raves/_rants) 13:15, 16 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I've largely rewritten this article, so I'm re-listing this for peer review. Daveydweeb (^chat/_patch) 12:52, 2 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Seriously, nobody has anything to add? Daveydw ee b (^chat/_patch) 10:04, 11 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Cite your sources. Try aiming for at least one cite per paragraph; it's shouldn't be too hard for an article that is core topic material. A few of the paragraphs are a bit short and need expansion or merging, but otherwise well done --DavidH Oz Au 11:39, 13 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]

That's a good goal to work towards, thanks! We're currently up to 16, but I'm working on it. Daveydw ee b (^chat/_patch) 13:54, 13 September 2006 (UTC)[reply]