Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Crash Bandicoot 3: Warped

Crash Bandicoot 3: Warped edit

The article looks pretty good and appears ready for a GAN, but I wanted to get a professional opinion and fix any possible mistakes before I put it up for a nomination. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 19:30, 23 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I would like to get back with more comments; don't know if time will allow. The gameplay section seems to go into a little too much detail about items, though. Tezero (talk) 21:53, 31 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Here I am again:

Delink North America and Europe as those are usually considered to be too generic for linking outside geography articles.
"The ruins of a space station called the Cortex Vortex owned by the series antagonist, Doctor Neo Cortex, crash-lands on Earth and unleashes an evil entity known as Uka Uka, who collaborates with Cortex and the time-obsessed Doctor Nefarious Tropy to gather powerful Crystals in their original places in time." ...I don't really have a problem with this one, but some Wikipedians would call that too long. Split it into a couple sentences and you'll be fine.
"Crash Bandicoot 3: Warped has received mostly positive reviews from major critics, and has sold 5.7 million copies as of July 9, 2002. The game went on to become the ninth best-selling PlayStation video game of all time." Rework this into one sentence for reviews, going into a little more detail about individual points of praise and criticism, and then a second sentence about sales. Also, 5.7 million copies makes this the 9th best-selling PS1 game; the current wording makes it seem like it sold a great deal more copies after that.
The gameplay section is a little disorganized and has a few redundancies and tangents. For example, it says twice that collecting 100 wumpa fruits gets you a life. Tezero (talk) 00:24, 10 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I went and made the suggested changes. Sorry for the hold-up there. Cat's Tuxedo (talk) 20:55, 13 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]