Wikipedia:WikiProject Video games/Peer review/Birdo

Comments from Tezero:

Try to find actual "Concept and creation" information for the section titled as such. The section is now almost exclusively "Characteristics"-like stuff.
Appearances should be expanded. You don't have to have a paragraph for each game unless that game has an intricate plot in which she plays a major role. But at least name each of the games that she's in and a one sentence+ mention of what she does in each. Either that or add a timeline similar to the one in Dragon Quest or Espio the Chameleon. Just saying, because Birdo doesn't appear in a huge number of games.
Good job on finding so much reception, but you may want to separate it on specific issues rather than positive vs. negative.
Link to LGBT characters in video games at least once in the article, perhaps in a "See also" section. Tezero (talk) 18:24, 21 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]