Wikipedia:WikiProject League of Copyeditors/Completed Articles Archive/March 2007

March 2007

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  1. Drop shipping: A short article about retail and wholesaling. Mr.Z-mantalk¢ 00:33, 24 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  2. Mimic (comics) Might need some polishing, but I think it's good to go.Konczewski 22:34, 28 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  3. The Black Parade - Recently just failed it's first GA nomination. Was suggested to be submitted here for help. I have tried to help this article out, however, I think I could use some more help as it was stated in the GA failed comment that it had prose and redundancy problems.  Orfen User Talk | Contribs 00:55, 20 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  4. Iraklis: was in bad shape this morning. This is my first major copyedit in a long time. Please let me know if it's about finished. --Moralis
  5. Heinrich Quincke: An auto-translated article from WikiGermany that started out rough but should be OK now. Galena11 21:22, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  6. Lords of the Realm II This article was in terrible shape. This is my first proofread, so I appreciate any comments and suggestions. Thanks! --Croberts1 04:48, 5 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    •   Done Nice job on the c/e, Croberts1! Just did some cleanup to eliminate wordiness, reordered sections to make sense (e.g., the Overview was at the bottom, moved it to top) etc. Galena11 23:37, 5 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  7. Frank Sindone: Philadelphia mobster and murderer. Galena11 18:51, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  8. Mako (dance): A Tongan dance. Short. Galena11 21:22, 7 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  9. The Boy in the Box (Vidal, California) Listed by Wikipedia as needing fixing, I think it's all set.LittleNuccio 02:28, 9 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  10. Arms and Equipment Guide This looks pretty good; it's ready for a proof.Croberts1 01:58, 9 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  11. Pokémon Trading Figure Game This is a short article that needs expanding, but it might as well be correct in the meantime.Croberts1 05:01, 6 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  12. Cricket World Cup — Currently a Featured Article Candidate. I feel that the quality of the prose is not up to mark, and there is also marked variation in writing style because of numerous contributors. May require light–medium copyedit. — Ambuj Saxena () 06:58, 22 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    Note this is no longer an FAC and was promoted recently as a matter of fact it's due on the main page March 13, 2007. I would remove it from here but I'm not a member of the league and don't know the policies. Quadzilla99 01:09, 10 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    Moved to completed section. Galena11 23:09, 10 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  13. Robert E. Lee High School (Jacksonville) The high school where Lynard Skynard was first formed, didn't need a lot. Mr.Z-mantalk¢Review! 02:04, 11 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  14. Download This Song Article on a single by MC Lars. It didn't need too much work, though I did redo one section which was quite, umm, confusing. Should be good to go now. Searles2sels (PJ) 03:08, 11 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  15. 2002 Mombasa hotel bombing Copyedit and fact-check (against Reference articles only).~ Otterpops 17:11, 22 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  16. Place Branding Also wikified - needs proofread and red-link removal --Wavemaster447 20:11, 8 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  17. Event Driven Architecture: Don't get it. Rintrah 07:46, 30 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
    I can't find flaws with this one, but I'm not yet comfortable with the style. --Sigma 7 19:47, 8 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
    Ready for final? --Sigma 7 02:18, 13 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  18. Monte Ne This article just needs a few once overs to root out some continuity and grammatical errors. --The_stuart 14:54, 23 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  19. Open air concert This one was quite a piece of work - I think it was bot-translated. Gave it a very thorough re-writing, and now it needs a second eye. Hillbillygirl 10:59, 18 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  20. Askam and Ireleth Recently promoted to good article status will need boosting up if it wants to be a featured article; a copyedit to start things off would be good. --Robdurbar 11:54, 25 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  21. Canals in Cheshire: Pretty straightforward. Galena11 17:27, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  22. Brooks-Baxter War: up to Factionalism within the Republican Party. Rintrah 05:30, 8 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  23. Coat of arms of Nabram: Polish coat of arms. Short. Galena11 17:58, 23 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  24. American Psycho - My friends, I want your help on this article. Make mr. Happy happy again. Rintrah 18:48, 23 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  25. Josef Wallnig - Please excuse me if I missed a lot of mistakes; my copyediting is pretty poor nowadays... Peace, Tohru Honda13 03:13, 21 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  26. Kebayoran Baru residential district in Jakarta, Indonesia. Short. Hillbillygirl 10:27, 16 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]
  27. Plaza Galerias Pachuca Otterpops 17:51, 29 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]