Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Peer review/Karamana

Karamana

This is a formal request for peer review for the article- Karamana Because, Karamana is considered to be one of the important places in the district of thiruvananthapuram. It has the cultural, economical and social quotient of both kerala and tamilnadu. Santhosh Janardhanan 11:08, 14 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comments Lacks references and inline citations. Add those. Please see the article Shahbag, which is a neighbourhood of Dhaka, and has recently undergone great improvement. You may consider following the format there, eg Etymology, History, Layout, Culture etc. Or you may see Wikipedia:WikiProject Indian cities for guidance. Regards.--Dwaipayan (talk) 08:49, 22 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Comments :

The land of Karamana is made fertile by its own river, Karamana River - Is this sentence accurate ? Can Karamana river be considered as the own river of Karamana region ? I believe that the sentence should be reframed.
The section Antiquity data contains just one sentence. The sentence can be moved to the lead, and the section can be dropped.
In the section Civil Society and Administration, the sentence : passes through Karamana onward to the CBD's of Thiruvananthapuram. creates confusion to readers. Please expand CBD.
The hyperlinks given in the article should be changed to wikipedia Citations.
There are many sentences which starts immediatly after a punctuation mark, without any space in between. A thorough copy editing is needed for the article. See : Wikipedia:How to copy-edit

Thats all for now. I will pitch in with more review comments, once these issues are addressed. Cheers, -- Rajith Mohan ^{(Talk to me..)} 11:04, 29 March 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Response :

I've taken care of Rajith's points. I invite Rajith once more to review this article.

thanks

Santhosh Janardhanan 13:14, 7 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]