Wikipedia:WikiProject Biography/Peer review/The Wiggles

The Wiggles edit

I would like this article to have a higher rating, from B to A and eventually to FA status. There has already been a general assessment of it, but I feel that it needs more input. It's an important topic, since as the article states, The Wiggles is the highest-grossing entertainers in Australia, and have influenced countless children and their families worldwide. --Figureskatingfan (talk) 05:43, 22 November 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Yannismarou edit

The lead is short. Check WP:LEAD.

"Using his connections with the Cockroaches, Field arranged with the Australian Broadcasting Corporation (ABC) to distribute their album in Australia. Their manager suggested that they tour.[3][8] Their public debut was at a pre-school in Randwick." Some choppy prose.

I am not sure about "Cultural References". The section looks listy, like trivia. Couldn't it get some proper prose?
"Honours" could also become a proper paragraph of prose.
Don't put in "See also" articles you have already linked above, such as List of The Wiggles songs.

References look fine to me. With some more tweaks I think the article could get GA status and then FA.--Yannismarou (talk) 15:50, 18 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]