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Request on 02:01:52, 22 December 2021 for assistance on AfC submission by 2607:FB91:2D04:E23A:48A:4B30:373C:3D67

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I need help with understanding a Prose position for the article. Please help me understand what is needed here. I am about to give up on this article.


2607:FB91:2D04:E23A:48A:4B30:373C:3D67 (talk) 02:01, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Needs to be rewritten as prose, which means that anything that isn't a complete sentence should become one. For instance,
"1st Spouse
35) Jeanette Ann Bishop
Born 28 March, 1941
Dead 11 February, 2017"
should be "His first wife was Jeanette Ann Bishop, who died on February 11th, 2017." or something to that effect. Rusalkii (talk) 05:47, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

03:26:09, 22 December 2021 review of submission by Ozflashman

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This page is about the latest production of the Hakuoki anime anime series, of which there are 6 previous pages.

I think the page is valid, but maybe the naming or some other detail is required or refs not in the right place. What happens now, is the content junked or can it be edited to meet the publication criteria? Can this submission be referred to created by User:Arami-re for comment? Ozflashman (talk)

Ozflashman (talk) 03:26, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

04:17:58, 22 December 2021 review of submission by ArtfulSquirrel

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Hi all! New here :) My submission was declined pretty quick for not showing significant coverage of the subject. I have 12 sources on it though, most of which are independent and reliable second hand sources. How many more should I find to demonstrate notability of the subject? Thanks for your help on this!! ArtfulSquirrel (talk) 04:17, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

ArtfulSquirrel, identify WP:THREE sources that are totally independent of the subject. Any source that is an interview, about page, or otherwise connected to the subject are not independent for establishing notability. Slywriter (talk) 12:33, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks, Slywriter. Here are three I believe would be best: https://eastbayexpress.com/what-does-the-apocalypse-smell-like-2-1/ https://hyperallergic.com/455897/lindsay-tunkl-rituals-for-endings-and-failure-when-you-die-you-will-not-be-scared-to-die/ https://bobcutmag.com/2018/07/16/artist-lindsay-tunkl/

There is this one too, but I guess it is more of a passing mention: https://i-d.vice.com/en_uk/article/wjdwp9/turning-the-world-of-fragrance-on-its-head-at-the-aix-scent-fair

What do you think?

05:29:24, 22 December 2021 review of submission by Ozflashman

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This page is about the latest production of the Hakuoki anime anime series, of which there are 6 previous pages.

I think the page is valid, but maybe the naming or some other detail is required or refs not in the right place. What happens now, is the content junked or can it be edited to meet the publication criteria? Can this submission be referred to User:Arami-re for comment? Ozflashman (talk)

Ozflashman (talk) 05:29, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Eyeballing it, a list of episodes that short should probably be merged into a parent article about the whole show (assuming it is notable). I can't find the parent article. Maybe check if the show itself meets the notability guidelines, and if yes create that article instead? I don't know much about anime but these previous pages looks like they could use some consolidation and better sourcing too. Rusalkii (talk) 05:44, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

15:04:33, 22 December 2021 review of submission by Homaisyou100

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Hello, can I ask if I could still edit my draft. It was declined due to that it "is not adequately supported by reliable sources". Homaisyou100 (talk) 15:04, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Homaisyou100, blogspot is not a source. you need to find independent reliable sources. Slywriter (talk) 15:10, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

16:04:25, 22 December 2021 review of submission by Gvrpkumar

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Phanindra Kumar.GVR (talk) 16:04, 22 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@Gvrpkumar the subject of the draft is not yet proven to be notable. Thsi draft will not be considered further. If you are the actor concerned may I suggest ignoring Wikipedia and concentrating on the career. FiddleTimtrent FaddleTalk to me 16:35, 23 December 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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