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03:48:16, 14 June 2020 review of submission by 72.28.33.243

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Not sure what this is promoting? It is bare minimum facts about an inventor and pro musician. 72.28.33.243 (talk) 03:48, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Shredgod21: It is promoting Allen Van Wert, who is not a notable person (not suitable for inclusion in the encyclopedia). --Worldbruce (talk) 03:57, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Oh, I was under the impression that the worlds fastest guitarist who also invented the worlds first A.I. picking trainer would be notable. Weird. MANY wiki pages should be removed then. How does one go about having non notable pages removed? I can provide a large list.— Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.28.33.243 (talk)

Remember to log in when you post. What you say is entirely possible. As this is a volunteer project where people do what they can when they can, it is possible for inappropriate articles to go undetected, even for years. We can only address what we know about. If you notice an article about a musician who does not seem to meet the definition of a notable musician, you are welcome to begin an Articles for Deletion discussion. 331dot (talk) 07:17, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

07:38:18, 14 June 2020 review of submission by Wikikruste

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Thank you for reviewing. I've just resubmitted removing unnecessary informations and giving it a more encyclopedic tone of voice. I'm not a native english speaker so any advice is welcome

Wikikruste (talk) 07:38, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]


08:12:11, 14 June 2020 review of draft by Gnp1975

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Hai I am creating a page for my client, Jiyen krishnakumar, south indian film director. i submitted the article with more than 15 refernces list. kindly let meknow the exact problem with article i submitted. so that i can coorect it. Gnp1975 (talk) 08:12, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Well it has pretty well explained by the reviewers, "Requires significant coverage in multiple independent reliable sources to show notability" - your actual draft includes two drafts in one article, the first one has a reference section which refers to IMDB which is not a reliable source at all, the second part indeed is listing several reliable references. You will need to merge the versions into one single draft. CommanderWaterford (talk) 11:23, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

11:04:39, 14 June 2020 review of submission by LanreBrainy

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LanreBrainy (talk) 11:04, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]


11:05:57, 14 June 2020 review of submission by LanreBrainy

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I want to upload a biography on Wikipedia

LanreBrainy (talk) 11:05, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Hi LanreBrainy, I think you are referring to the draft of your mother Draft:Alhaja Wulemotu Ashabi Titilope Jose - which had been denied because obviously for Wikipedia, she had not been a notable person. Please study Help:Your_first_article, also the criteria for notability Wikipedia:Notability and Wikipedia:Autobiography and over here Wikipedia:No_amount_of_editing_can_overcome_a_lack_of_notability.CommanderWaterford (talk) 19:25, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

15:28:05, 14 June 2020 review of submission by Beyonceluver99

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Beyonceluver99 (talk) 15:28, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]


I have modified the entire article and added both references & links.

18:51:08, 14 June 2020 review of submission by Iayaz

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(1) Reviewer objected that most of sources quoted NIP which is developer, you need to understand that NIP is a govenment authority responsible for industrial areas development therefore this is natural that news resources will rely on information given by NIP & therefore most of refrences have quoted NIP as source of information (2) secondly, i added to more reference for article

Iayaz (talk) 18:51, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Request on 20:33:31, 14 June 2020 for assistance on AfC submission by Coatshut80

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Hey, I recently created an article page for Philemon Jerry Masisi and would need someone to edit the article to make sure it gets successfully published. The previous decline said that the article is notable per WP:SOLDIER but it would benefit from some more sources. I cited every paragraph possible in the second edit.

Coatshut80 (talk) 20:33, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]


22:41:22, 14 June 2020 review of draft by Markus.mxx

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I want to write an Article about Micro-Advisory, because we started a Platform for Micro-Advisory for Entrepreneurs and realised that the Term wasn't used before and we need to explain it first. This is our text, but i never before wrote an Wikipedia-Article, why i don't know how to commit it correctly and i'm not a english native, sorry. Please help :)

START OF ARCTICLE
Micro-Advisory is the process of portioning long-term, holistic business improvement in small steps to solve one problem at a time, but within a guided process of long-term improvement. The focus is to empower entrepreneurs with the external expertise they need for their acute needs. the lockdown of corona-crisis paved the way to get this expertise remotely, as a lot of business advisory experts got used to share knowledge in short video-conferencing-sessions all over the world.

The term was first used in that sense by the Platform hallosophia.com in April 2020. A solution that was created during the #EUvsVirus Mentoring-Program after the #EUvsVirus Hackathon, with the goal of empowering entrepreneurs in times of an economic crisis, to lead their company and employees through the crisis. one of the basic problems identified and tackled is the fact that bridge loans, for loss of sales during the lockdown-period, need to be repaid with future revenues, therefor a long-term improvement plan is needed. big enterprises can afford a lot of business advisors for all fields, to seize every opportunity for improvement, but smaller entities can't afford the whole workforce of the advising-industry. therefor the digital guided process of Micro-Advisory makes the full range of expertise available and affordable for small- and medium-sized businesses. right now there is no proof for the effectiveness of micro-advisory for empowerment or decreasing probability of default in the future, as the first platform will be launched during july 2020.

Differentiation to Micro-Consulting:
Micro-Consulting is external help for a specific, small problem.
Micro-Advisory is portioning a long-term, holistic improvement process in small steps.


Inspiration:
The Inspiration for Micro-Advisory came from Microcredit, the provision of small loans to poor clients to become entrepreneurs and help themselves out of poverty with self-determination. the reduce the probability of failure as an entrepreneur, micro-advisory could be of use to increase the skills of entrepreneurship by empowerment with knowledge.

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European Innovation Council's Covid-19 Platform, Solution: halloSophia.com https://covid-eic.easme-web.eu/solution/microadvisory-platform-hallosophiacom-fast-lane-sophisticated-business-advice/about
Final Report of EUvsVirus https://www.euvsvirus.org/finalreport.pdf // Project halloSophia
MicroAdvisory on Twitter (link not available, but using #microadvisory)
Explanation Video on Youtube of halloSophia.com https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IT5yPNP-z00

Markus.mxx (talk) 22:41, 14 June 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Markus.mxx: I see a bunch of problems here:
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