Wikipedia:Peer review/Yam fortress/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review to promote it to good articles. It's a translation of good article in Russian, also written by me, so it need spell and grammar checking and maybe some technical help (like choosing of correct templates.

Thanks, Red wanna talk? 20:09, 5 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Borsoka

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The article requires a comprehensive copyedit before its peer review. A peer review can be requested at the Guilds of Copy Editors. Borsoka (talk) 01:53, 10 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

CaptainEek

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  • External links are in Russian which is useless to English speakers.
  • Could any more photos be found? Or another contemporary drawing?
    • All pictures are in the commons category, and there's nothing usefull: two plans of 1680 (same fortress with no any changes after 1645 plan), few pictures of unremarkable views of a fortress remains and a bunch of park photos. Red wanna talk? 15:56, 23 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • I agree that a thorough copyedit is needed. The English is quite rough in patches. 06:04, 22 November 2020 (UTC)

Alaexis

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Great article, I've done some copyediting of the lede, hopefully I'll be able to help with the rest as well. Alaexis¿question? 19:03, 5 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]