Wikipedia:Peer review/United States Navy/archive1

United States Navy edit

This is a former fac, having failed due to various reasons, but mostly because of writing style. I have gone through and done as thorough a copyedit as I can and would like to get some more feedback and suggestions. I think it is very close to being fa quality. Arcimpulse 04:25, 23 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 01:46, 26 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]