Reading through this article, it seems clear to me that it is not yet FA status - really just looking for feedback on exactly how it needs to be improved to reach that, and for feedback on which parts of the article need strengthening in general. Phl3djo 15:09, 23 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZt 21:59, 23 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
The sections are often only a paragraph long - try to expand them or else link them up under more general headings. Trebor 23:40, 28 October 2006 (UTC)[reply]
