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Trouble (Natalia Kills album) edit
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I've listed this article for peer review because I've been meaning to make it FA-class for a while now and I'd like that to happen eventually.
Thank you for reading and don't feel obligated to comment, however I would appreciate it a lot! Thank you! :) prism△ 15:28, 16 April 2014 (UTC)
- Comments from XXSNUGGUMSXX
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- Don't need the "exec" bit in producers field of infobox
- The info contained in the "background" section all belongs in the Perfectionist album page, not here. Find some info for this album if such a section is to be included.
- In "development" section, there is no need to mention people's nationalities
- In "artwork" section, just use ref#24 once at the end of the second paragraph per WP:OVERCITE
- More WP:OVERCITE in "composition" section- after ref#31, just use ref#29 once at the end of the second paragraph
- The Hall & Oates picture isn't really needed, if anything use someone who worked on any of the album's tracks
- In "reception" section, I strongly recommend removing Huffington Post (ref#56)- they're known for fraudulence in things like politics, science, and medicine.
- More WP:OVERCITE in "reception" section- ref#54 (AllMusic) should just be used at the end of the "rating of three and a half points out of five" bit. XXSNUGGUMSXX (talk) 17:34, 17 April 2014 (UTC)
- Comments from WikiRedactor
- There are two external links that may need to be corrected, although if I'm not mistaken Amazon.com citations often have this "problem" even though the links go through smoothly. Long story short, it's probably not going to be an issue.
- All of the pictures should include altnernate text.
- I would link "studio album" in the introduction.
- Since the "Background" section is kind of small, you could probably merge them into one paragraph and add it to the "Development" section, which I would suggest renaming "Background and development".
- I would mention that the album credits are adapted from the liner notes of Trouble in the "Track listing" section, like how it is in the "Personnel" section.
- You might be interested in moving the "Release history" references into a separate column, although that is purely a matter of personal preference.
The article is definitely in good condition, and is well on its way to becoming an FA! WikiRedactor (talk) 19:27, 16 April 2014 (UTC)