Wikipedia:Peer review/The Guardian Legend/archive1
The Guardian Legend edit
I think that this article could very well make the Featured Articles list at some point, but I'd like to know what needs improvement before I make it a candidate. I'll take any sort of constructive criticism, and I'm opening the whole article up for review. DocDragon 18:48, 12 May 2006 (UTC)
- Some issues:
- The lead is too short. Even though WP:LEAD requires only 1-2 paragraphs for the lead of an article this short, it would be helpful to expand it so that it summarizes the article.
- References are needed
- Inline citations are needed - see WP:FOOTNOTE, WP:CITE, and WP:V.
- Not comprehensive: the article has several short sections. Story is only a single paragraph.
- Image:TGL Box.jpg, Image:TGL.png, and Image:Guardian legend vtjog.png need fair use rationales (see WP:FUC)
- Trivia generally isn't included in featured articles, but here removing it would make the article too short.
- Per WP:DATE and WP:CONTEXT, years without full dates are generally not linked.
- Thanks, AndyZ t 20:41, 12 May 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks for the input, Andy. I've done some improvement, but I'm having a little trouble finding more information for the article. Any suggestions?
DocDragon 01:56, 15 May 2006 (UTC)