Tech Tower edit
This article is already a Good Article. What does it need in order to be near or at FA quality? —Disavian (talk/contribs) 06:01, 7 April 2007 (UTC)
- Merzbow (comments)
Great article, it's very close to FA quality in my book.
- I made some minor hopefully non-controversial copyedits.
- A number of paragraphs in this article don't have or end in inline citations; they need them.
- "an historical" -> "a historical" because "historical" begins with a consonant-type sound. (I had to look this up).
- I found one caption which I think needs to end in a period, and changed it, but now I'm not sure. Anyone more experienced with WP:CAP want to comment? Which of these captions are complete sentences?
- Should "technological education" be "technology education" or somesuch?
- One women gave over $340 million? Wow. The reference backs this up, but this sounds like a fantastic figure.
- Should instances of 'T' be "T" instead? I can't find the style rule here, but there must be one. (There are one or two places where T is bare also).
- "Modern usage" -> "Modern use" in that section heading.
- Merzbow 06:58, 7 May 2007 (UTC)