Wikipedia:Peer review/Summer of '42/archive1

Summer of '42 edit

Looking to get this oft neglected, quasi-cult film on the front page of Wiki. If anyone could offer any assistance in getting this article in tip-top shape for a Featured Article vote, I'd really appreciate it.Mistergrind 01:39, 8 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Some thoughts:

The lead is not general enough, there is too much music/box office info in here. Flesh it out into the article.
Use the theatrical poster if its not the same as the DVD cover.
Where is the plot summary? Is it supposed to be part of the factual basis section?
Ditch or merge the trivia.
All film titles in the text should be in italics.
Cast list is not good. See V for Vendetta (film) and other FAs for ideas to write about a cast. Should not be at the bottom either.
Awards section within cast is random. Try not to have lists, anywhere. Maybe merge this into reception, talk about the notable wins.
A screenshot would be useful.
Just checkout other FAs closey, compare it to the article to see how it can be improved.

Cheers. Cvene64 16:57, 10 June 2006 (UTC)[reply]