Wikipedia:Peer review/Seth MacFarlane/archive2
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This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I'm hoping this article can get closer to FA status. It is currently a GA, and think it would be best to help further the article in development. I do not expect it to be immediately ready for FA status, but any feedback would be better than nothing.
Thanks, Gage (talk) 19:37, 10 October 2009 (UTC)
Comments from Jujutacular (talk · contribs)
- Images need alt text.
Done Gage (talk) 21:32, 18 October 2009 (UTC)
- Some external links are broken (view them). Assuming these are sources, find replacements.
- Done For the most part. Replaced every source that was either a redirect or no longer exists. A few others still show up on the Toolserver, but they are mainly due to server problems, etc. Any help on that would be appreciated. Gage (talk) 03:05, 20 October 2009 (UTC)
- In the third paragraph of Early life, the cited source immediately following "Like a lot of animators... " - does not contain that quote.
- Done Removed quote. Gage (talk) 22:12, 18 October 2009 (UTC)
- In the fourth paragraph of Career in animation and television, it uses a quote from "a review by Jeff Cohen", but the following citation does not lead to a review by Jeff Cohen. Where did this quote come from?
- Done Removed the quote, as I was unable to locate the original source, only people using Wikipedia as the source of the quote. Gage (talk) 22:07, 18 October 2009 (UTC)
- In Activism and the 2008 Writers' Strike, it isn't clear what would be "a colossal dick move".
- Done Gage (talk) 21:42, 18 October 2009 (UTC)
- In Experience with September 11, 2001 attacks, quotation marks appear around "comedy" - but the marks do not appear in the source.
- Done Gage (talk) 22:03, 18 October 2009 (UTC)
