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I've listed this article for peer review because I would like to submit it to FLC. It just received a c/e by a GOCE member
Thanks, Jonayo! Selena 4 ever 11:13, 6 July 2012 (UTC)
Comments:
- Generally it looks pretty solid. The lead section is quite long - it's longer than Madonna's singles discography, and Madonna has had exactly the same number of singles. You might consider ways to edit it down to three paragraphs, although you're probably a better judge than me about what could be summarized and made more succinct. One way to do this could be to use numbers of songs instead of listing them individually, i.e. "Selena's "x" was among X number of singles that charted after her death." Or something of that nature.
- Are there no free images that could illustrate the article? If not, is there a valid fair-use claim for a primary illustration, given that she's dead?
- The subheading "non-singles" seems jarring, given that the article is about Selena's singles. Would it be more accurate to call this section "Other appearances" or something like that?
- Note number 4 should probably be placed after the song title "I'm Getting Used to You" instead of at the top of the chart.
- I noticed that the Madonna article has informative notes about release dates and other nuances/tidbits at the bottom of the Singles section. You might consider including some similar information in this one.