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Sean Sherk

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I've listed this article for peer review because…I would like to eventually get this article to GA status. I want to know what I have to do (other than expand the personal life section) to get this article to that point.

Thanks, --LAX 15:17, 10 August 2008 (UTC)

Comments from SRX

• He continued to wrestler for eleven years, where wrestled over 400 matches. - where ___?
• In 1999, Sherk fought his first MMA fight, which we won. - is there any more info on this?
  • Like what? Do you want me to say against who? Where it took place? The specific date in which it happened? --LAX 16:39, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
    • Never mind. I said who he defeated and how he won. --LAX 16:44, 12 August 2008 (UTC)
• In 2005, Sherk resigned with the UFC. - source?
• Is there any other up to date information of him?
  • Not that I know of. He has a fight coming up, but I don't think we should be listing future events, as Wikipedia is not a news site. --LAX 16:39, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

True, but any other info from May to July could be notable to add.--S_RX 16:46, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

• The article is relatively short, I recommend expanding it a bit and adding more details to a few statements, IMO.
• The personal life should be made into prose and not a list and their should be more information covering his life.
  • Like I said above, "other than expand the personal life section". So I already knew I had to expand that. --LAX 16:39, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

Oh Ok cool.--S_RX 16:46, 12 August 2008 (UTC)

--S_RX 16:30, 12 August 2008 (UTC)