Wikipedia:Peer review/Scholastic wrestling/archive1

Scholastic wrestling edit

I've listed this article for peer review because…

I've been editing this article either signed in or logged off on my own or at a public computer for some time now. Even though I'm not a wrestler, I've tried to make sure that this article is accurate and consistent with the current NFHS rules. Please check behind me. I'm mainly interested in improvements to the all of the sections, especially the History section (in conjunction with editing the History of collegiate wrestling page) for accuracy and detail, as well as in improving/correcting redundancies, spelling errors, and grammatical errors. Could someone also please consilidate repeated source references when appropriate?

I would also like to find out if people think the writing style of the article is clear, sufficient, and comprehensive enough (without being too burdensome to read) for the average reader. Other changes are also welcome that will improve the article. I would like to know if the article is at least B class. I would like to see the article become a Good article and even an A class or Featured article in the near future.

Thanks,

Wikiman86 (talk) 23:53, 26 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

P.S. By the way, I resurrected this Scholastic wrestling article because the High school section on the Collegiate wrestling article was grew to be too long. So it had to have its own space. Nevertheless, I hope that in terms of the writing style and such that this article will continue to be like its Collegiate wrestling counterpart, except where high school and middle school wrestling has its official differences of course, and such like. I originally intended this article to be a sort of "companion piece" to the Collegiate wrestling article. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 128.135.96.15 (talk) 15:07, 27 December 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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