Wikipedia:Peer review/S-mine/archive1

S-mine edit

I have worked hard on expanding this relatively obscure but interesting article on one of the most influential landmines in history. I'd like to get it featured soon, but to the obscurity of the topic matter, it does not get much traffic. So, I would like to see what other people think about it. Primalchaos 00:25, 31 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]

  • A referance section would be good for starters. --ZeWrestler Talk 00:49, 31 August 2005 (UTC)[reply]
    • Changed. See the bottom of the page. --Primalchaos 05:40, 2 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]
  • The article looks quite good to me. It could possibly use a few more links in the descriptive mid-section. There's probably a few more photos of this mine floating around.[1] Nasty little item. You might mention that part of its psychological effect was due to it's maiming ability, particularly with regard to limbs and genitalia. Thanks. :) — RJH 16:18, 1 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]
    • Added more links and what images I could find that were a confirmable and appropriate copyright status. Also incorporated comment of maiming fear. --Primalchaos 05:40, 2 September 2005 (UTC)[reply]