Wikipedia:Peer review/Roy Welensky/archive1
Roy Welensky edit
I have completely written this article in the past fortnight using a variety of sources. Welensky is a somewhat controversial figure in the decline of colonisation. Help would be appreciated regarding the standardisation of terms relating to Africans to ensure neutrality.
Thank you in advance to any comments given. michael talk 03:15, 19 May 2007 (UTC)
- The article looks good. Very informative, and I don't see any major WP:MOS issues. Doesn't seem to be any licensing issues with the images on the article. Here are a few minor suggestions:
- Welensky described himself as "half Jewish, half Afrikaner and 100% British". - Is there a source for this?
- The first paragraph of the "Amalgamation and federation" section might need some footnoting/sources.
- Link the dates in the Notes according to WP:MOSDATE so they'll appear according to user preference.
- Hong Qi Gong (Talk - Contribs) 06:26, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
- A big thank you for going above and beyond and managing to delve through the mess of PR's to leave a comment! Exceptional work my friend! I've read your comments, and will add some refs, and see about fixing up the dates. Regards Welensky's love for Albion, it's going to be a rough trip finding a reference, which is unfortunate, since I'll have to take that line out if I don't find one. Michael talk 13:11, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
- No need to thank me. I put in a request myself for an article I had worked on, so I thought I'd take the time to look over an existing request here. Just use your best judgement on whether or not to take out texts. I am by no means an absolute authority on these things. I'm only offering my humble suggestions. Hong Qi Gong (Talk - Contribs) 15:20, 4 June 2007 (UTC)
- A big thank you for going above and beyond and managing to delve through the mess of PR's to leave a comment! Exceptional work my friend! I've read your comments, and will add some refs, and see about fixing up the dates. Regards Welensky's love for Albion, it's going to be a rough trip finding a reference, which is unfortunate, since I'll have to take that line out if I don't find one. Michael talk 13:11, 4 June 2007 (UTC)