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I've listed this article for peer review because i've recently expanded it by 6000 bytes and I want to improve it but don't know exactly what there is about the article that needs attention, and I think it would be very cool if I could expand my local library's page even more than i already have.

Cheers love, the cavalries here, Lallint⟫⟫⟫Talk 22:09, 30 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Lallint: I have checked the whole list. Would you check Basshunter article in return? List of issues:

1. "The Flower Library was not the first library in Watertown." - why changing name if it's named "Roswell P. Flower Memorial Library"? Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

2. "The Watertown Social Library was created in 1805 and the Watertown Franklin Library stopped functioning in 1834." - so these are two different libraries? Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

3. "A new addition was started in March 1975 and completed June 1976.[1][vague]" and "In 2007 extensive renovation work was done to both the addition and the original part of the library.[6][vague]" has vague template. Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

4. "On the dome above there are four figures representing History, Romance, Religion and Science." - does these names mean actuall names of some divisions or just standard words which shouldn't be capitalised? I think the next sentence "These are interspersed with more figures personifying Fable, Drama, Lyric and Epic Poetry." explains it better. Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

5. “To know wisdom and instruction: to perceive the words of understanding" - use standard quotation marks (" "). 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

6. "As you enter the library (...)." Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

7. "Vale," - order, and quotation marks again. Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

8. "Mr. A. F. Lansing. The artist architect was Mr. Charles Rollinson Lamb" - Mr.?20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

9. No description for image in "Lions" section. Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

10. "The lion was first damaged in 1925 by a falling maple tree. In 1909 (...) - order. 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)

11. There is a lot of information mentioned in the infobox but not in the text Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

12. Reference number 15. No name of the website.

13. Reference number 6 and 10 - are those website really called "nyheritage.org" and "arrivedowntown.com"? Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

14. Reference number 4 - "See also" website has no name of website added. Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

15. Reference number 8 ("BURTrburt@wdt.net, RACHEL") - add only authors known by their name. Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]

16. Links to redirects. See Help:Link color. Eurohunter (talk) 20:45, 27 June 2022 (UTC)[reply]