Wikipedia:Peer review/Rockhurst University/archive1
I am looking for comments/contributions to make this article on Rockhurst University appropriate for and eligible for consideration as a featured article. As a major editor of this article, please provide me with feedback. Shaverc 23:49, 21 May 2007 (UTC)
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You may wish to browse through User:AndyZ/Suggestions for further ideas. Thanks, Zginder 12:31, 20 June 2007 (UTC)