Wikipedia:Peer review/Press Gang/archive1

Hi all. I've practically written all of this in its current state and would like to submit it for GA. I'd appreciate your suggestions for what could improve the article (including beyond GA). I don't always find vague comments like "some phrases are poorly constructed" helpful... if you have copyediting skills I'd find it much more helpful if you could correct such errors. The JPStalk to me 15:17, 7 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]