Wikipedia:Peer review/Povel Ramel/archive1

This article probably needs a bit work. How should it be inproved? More info on Films, Radioshows or... Well Something? 8122417769 14:53, 28 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]

  • The first thing that I noticed is the "Most popular songs" listing. It seems to be very disorganised, and a lot of the secondary bullets seem to serve little purpose. Organising that list by date(year), and cutting out a lot of the secondary points seems like an idea to me. --Canadian-Bacon 17:39, 28 July 2006 (UTC)[reply]