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I've listed this article for peer review because… It was previously peer reviewed and changes have been made.

Thanks, Flyguy33 (talk) 08:04, 26 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

comments by --Diaa abdelmoneim (talk) 15:09, 5 January 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Prose

You need to double the size of the lede.
Is it a corporation or organization? Infobox is not the same as lede.
It was founded in 2002, why hasn't there been inductees at that time?

Images

I suggest having an image in the lede, maybe the oldest inductee or something.
You have to add Alternative texts to your images.
Captions that aren't in sentences shouldn't have a period at the end. (like Ryan Howard. Smarty Jones.)

Style

Why isn't "Pride of Philadelphia Award" in table format? This would give consistency throughout the list, please change it.
I suggest using Name instead of Person; and Year instead of Inducted.
Please make the tables sortable, check also List of members of the Baseball Hall of Fame to see how it may be done.
I don't see the relevancy of the see also section, please remove it.
Remove the colors in the table.

References

You have to have consistent dates in the references, so it's either 2009-08-01 or 1 August 2009.
The title of the references mustn't be all capital, even if it is so on the original page.