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I'm working on all the pages for municipalities in Denmark, going through them one by one. Nyborg - my home municipality - was naturally the first. So I would like to see if the format and writing is good, considering a lot of pages will follow the same style. I also might nominate it for GA sometime, so ways to improve towards that would be nice, too.

Thanks. Kaffe42 (talk) 19:24, 10 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]

There are a few things I noticed quickly that should be improved if your goal is GA (See the Good article criteria):

The lead section of the article is too short. Ideally, the lead of this article should be 2–3 paragraphs (I would describe the current one as somewhere between 1 and 2) and a summary of all the content of the article (There is little to no mention of the content in most sections).
The last paragraph of the History section and the section about Ullerslev are not cited.
The demographics and economy sections need expansion.

If you would an example of what a GA looks like for this type of article, I would recommend reading Fort Saskatchewan. Username ⁶⁸⁹² _{(Peer Review)} 17:37, 25 October 2020 (UTC)[reply]