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I've listed this article for peer review because it has been significantly developed recently, and I'd like to take it to GA or FA nominations in the future. It's about a human rights lawyer who has been oppressed under the Chinese Communist regime. Any help is highly appreciated.

Thanks, Thomas Meng (talk) 20:11, 26 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Binksternet comments

Far too much bolding. The only bolding should be the title of the article, and any other title that redirects to the article, such as an alternate name or alias.
The timeline format is terrible. Any article that is expected to advance higher on Wikipedia should have its information presented in prose.
You are missing a lot of good sources, for instance Reuters, Voice of America, Asia Times, BBC, New York Times 2012, New York Times 2016 and UK Guardian.
Identical references should be merged using named refs. See WP:REFNAME. Binksternet (talk) 01:20, 31 July 2020 (UTC)[reply]

@Binksternet: Thanks so much for your constructive comments. I've fixed issues 1,2 and 4. Will take sources from pt. 3 into consideration shortly.--Thomas Meng (talk) 18:41, 2 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]