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New Jersey State Constitution edit

I've worked forever on this article. I got it to GA awhile ago. Forgot about it, then realized I wanted to get it to FA. So here it goes. Yell at me if you must. Evan^{(Salad dressing is the milk of the infidel!)} 19:06, 4 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ _t 02:52, 5 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]
I've made several edits and included some comments on pending issues in the Discussion page. Patiwat 00:49, 6 November 2006 (UTC)[reply]

I have made several edits to the article, and have the following comments:

Is the word "instantiate" used correctly? Webster translates this as "to represent (an abstraction) by a concrete instance, e.g., heroes instantiate ideals." The article uses the term in a manner similar to "establishes," "authorizes," or "allows." I'd suggest using a more appropriate word.
Is it neccesary to boldface "Article X" the first time it is mentioned in a section? It doesn't really add anything to the article, and also seems redundant, given that in most cases, it is the first word of the section.
Someone please copyedit the last paragraph of Article XI section and the Criticisms section.
The notes section should be merged with the references section.

-- Patiwat 00:11, 6 November 2006 (UTC)