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Motivation crowding theory edit

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I've listed this article for peer review because it's too short and I can't figure out how to expand it.

Thanks, Selery (talk) 15:08, 13 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

A couple of thoughts:
- The supply curve could be moved higher (I almost missed it on first glance - it's more useful than the firefighters picture, which also more goes with the material on managers adapting to psychology) and most of the caption moved into the text. An explanation of it - that people may get up to the minimum level of income they want and then start valuing free time more than they value additional income - would be nice. An alternative form of this probably appeared in the former Soviet Union when they tried monetary rewards, in that there were so few higher-quality or usefully-greater-quantity consumer goods available to spend the money on, people weren't interested (a citation would be necessary for this, however!).
- You might try soliciting for input via the talk page of the two main articles linked to as examples, and/or on the WikiProject Economics talk page (or other appropriate pages).
Allens (talk) 15:31, 20 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! I swapped the image positions and will work on your other suggestions soon. Selery (talk) 02:24, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Done Paragraph about the curve added, and asked for further review on both parent topic articles and both wikiproject talk pages. Selery (talk) 15:32, 21 January 2012 (UTC)[reply]