Modern Family edit
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I've listed this article for peer review because I hope that eventually this article could be come a featured article or a good article like multiple other television show articles
Thanks, NoD'ohnuts (talk) 00:36, 5 December 2010 (UTC)NoD'ohnuts
Maury (am I doing this right?)
Sorry, but I really don't think this is GA quality, and needs some serious work. Here are some issues:
1) too much trivia. 2) the lead is longer than the body. 3) the body is all broken up into parts with no apparent order 4) Origin and Pickup should be merged into History 5) Special Guest Stars should be removed, it is subject to change and this article is not a list. 6) The list of countries and premiers is definitely not something that should be in the article
Sorry, I realize this looks like a pile-on, and it is, but I think a couple of hours of editing could fix all of this. Maury Markowitz (talk) 13:31, 6 December 2010 (UTC)
Finetooth comments: I agree with Maury Markowitz that the article is something of a hodge-podge with no apparent order. I have some other thoughts as well; here are a few of them:
- Isn't the material in this article already adequately covered by Modern Family (season 1) and Modern Family (season 2)? If some of the material in this article is new, couldn't it be merged with one of the other articles?
- Will readers who are color-blind be able to make sense of the color-coded chart?
- The claim (repeated twice) that the show received unanimously positive reviews is doubtful, unsourced, and contradicted in the "Criticism and controversy" section.
- Quite a few of the citations are incomplete or malformed.
- The tools at the top of this review page find three links in the text that go to disambiguation pages instead of their intended targets and one dead link in the reference section.