Wikipedia:Peer review/Military history of Mexico/archive2

Military history of Mexico edit

So here's the deal: I had this requested for a peer review before, the article looks pretty good - aside from the need for citations. This really is a request, but please consider this a recruitment as well! Are you good with military history? Please help edit - I have had some external factors inhibiting me from editing that article like I should have! Please see the first archive here. ε γκυκλοπαίδεια* 20:01, 25 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Good article. A couple of things. You should try to avoid wikilinking words in section headers (like 20th century) and don't overlink too much. I found 19th century and United States linked over 5 times. It's unnecessary. It's a good article overall, though. :) Gflores ^Talk 22:14, 26 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
You need to format references better. Reference style is not external link style. Renata 17:38, 27 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]
Needs a historiography section. Fifelfoo 09:11, 31 January 2006 (UTC)[reply]