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I've listed this article for peer review because…

It has never been assigned a quality rating
It concerns an influential person in an important American subculture (evangelicalism)
The subject resigned from the job he is best known for, completing an "arc" in his life, so it's a logical time to review
Recent developments in the person's career were controversial, so input on BLP issues and balance is desirable

I think the "Public Image" and "Beliefs" sections are a little weaker than the history and might benefit from some restructuring, but I don't see the best way to do this at the moment, so looking for suggestions.

Thanks, Sigeng (talk) 01:57, 9 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Hi. I'll have a good read of this article and give you a proper review later. To start off with though, reference numbers 1, 23, 24, 110, 127 and 128 are currently dead - these will either need to be replaced, or you can provide a link to an archived version (if there's one available). Also check reference 126, as this now redirects to a generic menu page. There's one of two other minor redirecting issues which are listed here. Cheers, ★ Bald Zebra ★ ^talk 11:18, 3 December 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. I did clean a few of those refs a while back. I think one of the links must have been temporarily down. If you have notes from your review please post. Cheers. Sigeng (talk) 01:06, 1 January 2015 (UTC)[reply]