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I've listed this article for peer review because this is the first live album article I plan to GA nominate, and I think it would be better to solve all problems in a friendly PR before the main nomination.

Thanks, WonderBoy1998 (talk) 13:26, 13 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Hi there. I read through the article and it looks pretty good, but here are few things that you can do to improve it:

The article makes reference to Shakira's official website but doesn't mention the website's name. Can you add that?

The name of the site is Shakira.com. Does it need anything more than that? --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:14, 21 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Probably not. --1ST7 (talk) 23:18, 21 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"Carlos Quintana from About.com gave the DVD an extremely positive review..." It's better to use the word "very" rather than "extremely".

Done! --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:14, 21 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"Noting them to be reflective..." Wikipedia:Words to watch discourages using "note" or any of its variants as a synonym for "said".

Replaced! Thanks for telling me too. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:14, 21 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

This phrasing is a little awkward: "found the video versions much impressive..." Do you mean "much more"?

Lol this sentence is so funny must admit! I'm almost tempted to leave it that way --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:14, 21 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Please mention that Adam Markovitz is from Entertainment Weekly.

Mentioned. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:14, 21 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

--1ST7 (talk) 21:47, 20 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your help! Also, in your opinion, does this article lack proper coverage? Should I add a synopsis section? I've seen a video article like Britney Spears: In the Zone which doesn't. --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 17:14, 21 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

You're welcome! I don't think a synopsis section is necessary for this to pass the GA review, though it would be an improvement to the article for it to have more coverage. --1ST7 (talk) 23:18, 21 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Information on Live from Paris is very limited and this was all I could find. I think it is enough. Shall I nominate it now? --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 13:34, 22 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

It looks ready, in my opinion. Good luck! --1ST7 (talk) 23:12, 22 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you so much! --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 15:14, 23 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]